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Pip's Sister ([info]pipssister) wrote in [info]fandom_wank,
@ 2005-12-05 23:44:00
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Current mood:Mystified

Teeny-but-fun Gravitation Review Wank
Gurabiteshiyon.net is a fanfiction.net-esque site that only archives Gravitation fanfic. On this website, newbie yukistwin posts a story in "dream format", which apparently means that punctuation is optional.

This inspires some fun reviews:

Anon 1:
Periods are your friend.
Ellipses are not.
This story really needs a mend.
Stop with the dot dot dot.


Paragraphs are good, too.
And other punctuation.
A beta would help this goo.
Right now, there's no fascination.

Fan DyingAngel, who apparently also types in "dream format" calls the first anon "bitchy". Which inspires another Anon to defend Anon #1 and a tl;dr review on the subject of ellipses.

Then comes this review by "SHUICHI'S MAD!"
You know if people read Eiri's disclaimer at the top of the story they would see that HE TELLS YOU IT"S NOT IN PROPER FORMAT YOU*&%#@% BUNCH OF #%#^@!!*&@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So don't rip up my Yuki just because YOU didn't take 10 seconds to read the fine print!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT"S RIGHT EIRI, I GOT YOUR BACK!!!!

Well, isn't that special?

ETA: BALEETED!


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(Anonymous)
2005-12-06 07:59 am UTC (link)
Does this "Shuichi's Mad" person not know any decent foul language? Or does the entirety of his reading material consist of Gravitation fic and the Sunday morning comics?

Hitchhiker42

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[info]belafarinrod
2005-12-06 08:05 am UTC (link)
Aw

If someone would take the time to write me a review, even a bad one, as a little poem, I would be ever so flattered ^^

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[info]crysiana
2005-12-06 08:16 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I thought the poem was really cute. Of course, it's kind of late here, so it could be just me.

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(no subject) - [info]ladylance, 2005-12-06 08:52 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]amxjm, 2005-12-06 11:26 am UTC

[info]dontgiveahoot
2005-12-06 11:27 am UTC (link)
I did that once. (Wrote a poem as a review, I mean.) The author loved it - though mine was a positive review so that's not too surprising.

And your icon is great. ^_^

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[info]yosei
2005-12-06 08:26 am UTC (link)
:\ I hate it when people post as characters outside of RPs.

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[info]sorchar
2005-12-06 09:51 am UTC (link)
Icon love!

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[info]darkchan
2005-12-06 10:48 am UTC (link)
I'll second that Icon Love!

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(no subject) - [info]magic_lilybean, 2005-12-06 07:45 pm UTC

[info]felinephoenix
2005-12-06 11:26 pm UTC (link)
Me too. IMHO, it's a sign of being a bad RPer.

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[info]chaimonkey
2005-12-06 09:06 am UTC (link)
*wanders off to enjoy the porn*

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[info]jetwolf
2005-12-06 10:04 am UTC (link)
My life shall remain incomplete until I receive the following series of reviews: one in haiku, one in iambic pentameter, and one in free verse.

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[info]spleen
2005-12-06 02:25 pm UTC (link)
Your icon is joy
of sock-twirling proportions!
Yes, love me some Giles.

Uh, yes. Right. Um:

We hold these truths to be self-evident.

Pay no attention to the Jefferson twirling in his grave. And, er:

Yes, his love-
-liness is visible to
all
everyone
all on this earth
of ours, glorious
and many-splendored as is
his snark.

How's that?

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(no subject) - [info]scootermcgaffin, 2005-12-06 06:05 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]jetwolf, 2005-12-06 06:12 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]spleen, 2005-12-06 06:16 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]kadath, 2005-12-06 07:50 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]spleen, 2005-12-06 08:07 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]platedlizard, 2005-12-06 10:39 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]jetwolf, 2005-12-06 06:14 pm UTC

[info]stimps
2005-12-06 10:23 pm UTC (link)
Don't give up until you get a sestina! Yaarrrrr!

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-07 02:31 am UTC

[info]annepackrat
2005-12-06 12:10 pm UTC (link)
Considering that punctuation seems optional on about 90% of the Internet, I don't really see what the Anon is so upset about.

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-06 04:10 pm UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-06 08:25 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]grand_sealink, 2005-12-07 12:52 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]annepackrat, 2005-12-07 11:43 am UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-08 08:08 am UTC

[info]eeveee
2005-12-06 02:22 pm UTC (link)
I can't help but feel sort of impressed that "Shuichi's mad" knows how to properly use the apostrophe.

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[info]shockfluff
2005-12-06 02:43 pm UTC (link)
She removed the story. Damn it, I was only late for a day or so and missed everything!

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[info]tavalya_ra
2005-12-06 03:07 pm UTC (link)
So, it's okay to violate the rules of grammar if I'm going to say that I know I'm doing so?

Yeah, that would have really flown in my English classes.

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[info]palabradot
2005-12-06 03:09 pm UTC (link)
Okay, I'd like a review like that. Short and sweet, and I can dance to it.

The title of the page, however, makes my eyes cross. Couldn't they just say "Gravitation" and get it over with?

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(no subject) - [info]lazulisong, 2005-12-06 08:00 pm UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-06 08:11 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]lazulisong, 2005-12-06 08:17 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]grand_sealink, 2005-12-07 12:53 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]pipssister, 2005-12-06 08:54 pm UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-07 01:06 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]pipssister, 2005-12-07 01:12 am UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-07 02:01 am UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-07 02:09 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]pipssister, 2005-12-07 02:45 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]hinata, 2005-12-07 12:55 am UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-15 06:00 pm UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-15 07:14 pm UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2006-01-10 03:28 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]pipssister, 2005-12-07 01:26 am UTC

[info]harrylovesron
2005-12-06 04:43 pm UTC (link)
"yukistwin" has the word "vampiress" in its e-mail. Another point against them. "Vampiress" isn't a word any more than "authoress" or "werewolfess". Isn't there a Jurisimprudence law about using words like that...?

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-06 06:21 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]harrylovesron, 2005-12-07 01:12 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]elimination, 2005-12-07 01:40 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]harrylovesron, 2005-12-07 04:47 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]lazulisong, 2005-12-06 08:07 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]moriath, 2005-12-06 09:52 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]lazulisong, 2005-12-06 10:24 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]moriath, 2005-12-07 12:49 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]justicepeckham, 2005-12-07 04:04 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]hinata, 2005-12-07 12:53 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]harrylovesron, 2005-12-07 01:31 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]sabinelagrande, 2005-12-08 10:24 am UTC

sharonapple
2005-12-06 05:34 pm UTC (link)
Considering that in canon, Yuki is an actual writer (well.. a writer of scandalous porn... hunh, I wonder if he would end up sporked on the weepingcock community?) I think he would kill anyone, never mind a sibling, for misusing punctuation.

Man, I'd pay to watch that. Death by cigarette burn, and possibly, violation with a bourbon beer bottle.

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(no subject) - [info]elektra3, 2005-12-06 08:34 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]lazulisong, 2005-12-06 10:25 pm UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2007-04-12 04:50 am UTC
(no subject) - sharonapple, 2007-04-12 05:51 am UTC

[info]kinneas
2005-12-06 05:56 pm UTC (link)
Wow, Gravitation... That brings back some serious memories, man. I remember when the third episode came out in subtitled English like five or six years ago. Old school, motherfuckers!

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-07 04:41 am UTC

[info]doroc_sabah
2005-12-06 06:54 pm UTC (link)
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!

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(no subject) - [info]simkin_mouse, 2005-12-06 10:51 pm UTC

tsunade
2005-12-06 10:22 pm UTC (link)
LMAO

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[info]semtex
2005-12-07 01:34 am UTC (link)
Dare I ask wtf "dream format" is??

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(no subject) - [info]pipssister, 2005-12-07 01:52 am UTC
(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-07 02:35 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]tekenduis, 2005-12-07 03:46 am UTC

[info]split
2005-12-08 05:32 am UTC (link)
Ah, how I love anonymous reviewer.

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[info]smo
2005-12-08 10:12 pm UTC (link)
GIP.

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2005-12-16 04:12 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]smo, 2005-12-16 04:33 pm UTC

  
   
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