Teeny-but-fun Gravitation Review Wank
Gurabiteshiyon.net is a fanfiction.net-esque site that only archives Gravitation fanfic. On this website, newbie yukistwin posts a story in "dream format", which apparently means that punctuation is optional.

This inspires some fun reviews:

Anon 1:
Periods are your friend.
Ellipses are not.
This story really needs a mend.
Stop with the dot dot dot.


Paragraphs are good, too.
And other punctuation.
A beta would help this goo.
Right now, there's no fascination.

Fan DyingAngel, who apparently also types in "dream format" calls the first anon "bitchy". Which inspires another Anon to defend Anon #1 and a tl;dr review on the subject of ellipses.

Then comes this review by "SHUICHI'S MAD!"
You know if people read Eiri's disclaimer at the top of the story they would see that HE TELLS YOU IT"S NOT IN PROPER FORMAT YOU*&%#@% BUNCH OF #%#^@!!*&@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So don't rip up my Yuki just because YOU didn't take 10 seconds to read the fine print!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT"S RIGHT EIRI, I GOT YOUR BACK!!!!

Well, isn't that special?

ETA: BALEETED!