My favorite part is that when someone says

Here are a couple sample sentences from the first two chapters that gave me pause and are representative of what I found difficult while reading.

"She carried her stocky build carefully back down the stairs."

"Don and Katy watched hypnotically Gino place more coffees out at another table with supreme balance."

Jacqueline responds first that "but formatting was fixed in the new copy!" and later "there's nothing wrong with those sentences". Because that's totes a formatting thing, and also those sentences make so much sense.