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Loopywafflehead (

loopywafflehead) wrote in

otf_wank,

That is some major, creepy, disturbingly intense passive-aggression.

The tags on Jane's post are the best summary ever: 04 pages read, capitalisation errors, clichéd, exposition, ineffective back cover copy, overwritten, poor characterisation, poor use of detail r, poor word choice, poor writing, problems with grammar, problems with punctuation, punctuation

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