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Beelzebabe ([info]beccafran) wrote in [info]smutty_claus,
@ 2007-12-02 18:02:00


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Entry tags:harry/ginny

FIC: such a beautiful blank (but smooth it) (Harry/Ginny)
To: ReallyCorking
From: Your Secret Santa


Title: such a beautiful blank (but smooth it)
Author: jenadamson (website)
Word Count: 12,500
Pairing: Harry/Ginny
Summary: Ginny picks a rose, and her world spins out of control.
Rating: NC-17
Authorís Notes: This fic was very loosely inspired by tale of Tam Lin, somewhat more inspired by the film Groundhog Day, and named for a line in Sylvia Plath's poem Amnesiac. Thank you so so much to my betas! Happy Holidays, [info]reallycorking!!!! It was such an honor to be able to write for you.


Read the story here.




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[info]lunalovepotter
2007-12-03 12:07 am UTC (link)
This is absolutely brilliant! I love it. :D [info]reallycorking is one lucky girl!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:18 pm UTC

[info]nightfalltwen
2007-12-03 12:16 am UTC (link)
Great story. :) Very enjoyable read.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:18 pm UTC

[info]shocolate
2007-12-03 12:26 am UTC (link)
that was very lovely and I want to squish your Harry.

Also - why aren't there more fic where Ron and Ginny share a flat?

It's adorable.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:19 pm UTC

[info]deena_s
2007-12-03 01:25 am UTC (link)
alright!! nice work!!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:19 pm UTC

[info]lady_caetlyn
2007-12-03 01:25 am UTC (link)
This was great. I really do feel bad for Ginny, but it had a sweet and happy ending. Wonderful scene between Harry and Ginny

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:19 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-03 01:48 am UTC (link)
Very, very nice work! This was such an interesting premise, and it was well executed. Just enough humor to keep it from being too sad at times. I really like the fact that it wasn't necessarily the sex that broke the spell but that she told him and he believed her.
-irislock

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:20 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-03 02:02 am UTC (link)
I love it, I love following Ginny's frustration and gradually changing thought :)

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:20 pm UTC

[info]treewishes
2007-12-03 02:04 am UTC (link)
Wow, what a great story! Beautifully executed. I'll remember this one for a long time.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:21 pm UTC

[info]jairissa
2007-12-03 02:20 am UTC (link)
Oh, this was lovely. It's not usually a pairing I like, but I was really hoping for Ginny by the end of it.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:21 pm UTC

[info]green_amber
2007-12-03 04:10 am UTC (link)
You said the magic words. And the magic words are "Tam Lin." :)

Seriously, though, I'd love this even without Tam Lin. You have some gorgeous language in this fic, and the way Ginny has to become friends and then lovers with Harry all over again satisfies what JKR left unsatisfied in Deathly Hallows. That is, I never felt like she developed the H/G romance as much as she needed to in order to make it convincing that they eventually married and lived happily ever after. Here, they get that development, and it's made of yay.

I'm also reminded, I think by the way Ginny becomes more aware of her family as well as Harry during the repeated day, of the bit in Our Town where Emily is dead and watching her old self go through her day and says that none of them really see each other as they go about their day. Emily didn't get another chance to pay attention to her family during the brief time they had, but Ginny does here.

Excellent fic and one that's sure to stay in my memory.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:23 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-03 04:39 am UTC (link)
Nicely done! Brilliantly written smut. Thanks so much for putting so much into this story. It was simply delicious to read.

LadyTory on LJ

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:23 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-03 04:42 am UTC (link)
That was - wow. I haven't read a story like that in a really, really long time. This one will definitely stay with me, and is going into my top favorites. I love the characterization, the lovely circular way Ginny keeps waking up to the same morning... you really brought me into her world, the lonely days that are all the same, her love of Ron and her mother and Harry. And the scene with Harry on that very last day was just - perfect.

Thank you for such a great read.

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(Anonymous)
2007-12-03 04:42 am UTC (link)
That was - wow. I haven't read a story like that in a really, really long time. This one will definitely stay with me, and is going into my top favorites. I love the characterization, the lovely circular way Ginny keeps waking up to the same morning... you really brought me into her world, the lonely days that are all the same, her love of Ron and her mother and Harry. And the scene with Harry on that very last day was just - perfect.

Thank you for such a great read.

(thewrittendream on LJ)

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:24 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-03 05:02 am UTC (link)
Wow. It broke my heart and then mended it again all in one go. Great job.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:24 pm UTC

[info]tunxeh
2007-12-03 05:26 am UTC (link)
TAM LIN!
And such a gorgeous take on Tam Lin, with my favorite couple.
This is wonderful.
Ok, Groundhog day too, but Tam Lin.

I really like the way you have her recapitulate her journey with Harry — initially a little nervous, then tense and nervous and trying too hard, and finally having it work when she relaxes into it.

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(no subject) - [info]tunxeh, 2007-12-03 06:21 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:24 pm UTC

[info]purebloodgryff
2007-12-03 05:38 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is so perfectly laid out! What a creative premise and you worked it so well.

Excellent stuff, per usual, mystery author! ;)

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:25 pm UTC

[info]ethelbert
2007-12-03 10:32 am UTC (link)
That was most excellent. Left me grinning like an idiot, truth be told. I was most impressed with the way you introduced a magical (supernatural or whatever you can call it) element like the elfin queen that doesn't exist in canon, it felt really seemless and natural and very few succeed in that. I'm also impressed how you managed avoid making Ginny's recurring day tedious. Perhaps it has something to do with the engaging manner you wrote Ginny in.

I really, really enjoyed reading this fic, it's been a while since I read a Harry/Ginny fic this good.

hildigunnur on lj.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:25 pm UTC

[info]djinnj
2007-12-03 10:41 am UTC (link)
Oh, wonderful! Ginny's reactions day by day were so telling, and the depth of her feeling was so genuine. The dynamic between all the characters was lovely, too.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:25 pm UTC

[info]beccafran
2007-12-03 04:17 pm UTC (link)
This is wonderful, secret author. Just what I've been wanting to read of these two after DH -- it's original and fresh, yet still fits right into canon and everyone is perfectly in character. Fantastic job.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:26 pm UTC

[info]reallycorking
2007-12-03 04:24 pm UTC (link)
OH. MY. GOD. alkfajsdflkjafaoawieaeeelkjakfjla'[po

OMG THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!

There are so many beautiful, gorgeous things about this fic, I don't even know where to start. I guess, to begin, I'll just say how cool it is that you based this on Tam Lin (which I didn't know much about before) because it was a really interesting way of making Harry and Ginny have to "start over," so to speak. Very cool.

The characterizations were WONDERFUL. Ginny was so very herself--outgoing and bubbly and bold, but introspective too, and her character arc in this story was totally believable. The way that she reacted to her situation in the beginning, middle and the end was just right on, I felt. I loved how she just really began to miss Harry, and it was actually interesting too how she began to appreciate every moment, and kept finding something new to experience in the same day. Loved especially the part at the Burrow. Oh, poor Ginny, going to sleep in her childhood bed. Heartbreaking. D:

And Harry, oh Harry. He was just so appealingly magnetic and nervous and himself and also just really hot. By the time we came to the last couple days, I just wanted her to jump him so badly. And she did! hee. I loved the fact that, while they hadn't been in a relationship in this alternate reality, there was still the attraction there, and Ginny knew what buttons to push for him, and he was responsive and ACK. So lovely. :x :x

And the sex was just amazing and gorgeous, and I loved how Harry was cautious, but just couldn't find it in himself to resist her, and it was just so FULFILLING because Ginny had been waiting for so long and needed him so badly and aldskfja. SO GOOD.

And I agree with Shoc--Ron and Ginny sharing an apartment was adorable! :D

I have to go to work and omg I wish I could be completely long-winded in my praise but I have to run. T__T But. I adore you so, so much for writing me such a gorgeous fic. I really appreciate the plot you've constructed and the time and attention that you gave to the characters. ♥ Thank you so much, it was an absolute pleasure to read. And re-read. :D :D

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2007-12-03 10:50 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:26 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]reallycorking, 2008-01-08 03:30 am UTC

[info]weselan
2007-12-03 08:43 pm UTC (link)
What a great tale! At moments bittersweet, you can really feel Ginny's frustration. I will definitely have to bookmark this story :) [info]reallycorking is one lucky girl to get this for Christmas!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:27 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-03 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, very nicely done! You've made the playing with time plausible and I loved all the little details about the day she had to live over and over again.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:27 pm UTC

[info]el_em_en_oh_pee
2007-12-04 04:46 am UTC (link)
Oh, wow, this was amazing - amazingly characterized, amazingly paced, amazingly well done. I absolutely love it.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:27 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-04 07:34 am UTC (link)
Wow! That was fucking fantastic! Ginny's characterization is so spot on to how I imagine her, and I love how Harry just can't stay away from her.

Great job!

rdprice29 on LJ

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:27 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-04 04:54 pm UTC (link)
Oh wow! This was just fantatstic!

I'm completely in love with your Harry! He is just too adorable!

Wonderful! Wonderful!

(lnalvgd on LJ)

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:28 pm UTC


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