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Queen of the Cardboard Jungle ([info]beccafran) wrote in [info]smutty_claus,
@ 2007-12-02 18:02:00


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Entry tags:harry/ginny

FIC: such a beautiful blank (but smooth it) (Harry/Ginny)
To: ReallyCorking
From: Your Secret Santa


Title: such a beautiful blank (but smooth it)
Author: jenadamson (website)
Word Count: 12,500
Pairing: Harry/Ginny
Summary: Ginny picks a rose, and her world spins out of control.
Rating: NC-17
AuthorĂ­s Notes: This fic was very loosely inspired by tale of Tam Lin, somewhat more inspired by the film Groundhog Day, and named for a line in Sylvia Plath's poem Amnesiac. Thank you so so much to my betas! Happy Holidays, [info]reallycorking!!!! It was such an honor to be able to write for you.


NOTE: with the closing of geocities, this story has been moved! Please update your bookmarks.

Read the story at its new home here.



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(Anonymous)
2007-12-04 05:43 pm UTC (link)
This is made of so much love. It made me feel happy inside.

~ akissinacrisis on lj

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:28 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-04 06:23 pm UTC (link)
Wow, not the usual H/G fan fic stuff, interesting and fun to read. And in the end, when Harry and Ginny got it on, perfect hotness. Who could resist Ginny? "You're not my boyfriend, are you?", whenever Ginny mentions this, makes me laugh, considering Harry's reaction.

ginny88 from LJ

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:29 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-04 06:58 pm UTC (link)
that was fabulous!!!

--samanthacr
http://samanthacr.livejournal.com

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:29 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-04 07:06 pm UTC (link)
outstanding job....I normally don't like these after groundhog day it seemed like everyone wanted to do a version of this on their TV show....but you captured the feelings perfectly

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:30 pm UTC

[info]antosha
2007-12-04 07:08 pm UTC (link)
Oh! Yay! Folklore and Groundhog's Day and Harry/Ginny! What a wonderful combination!!!!

:-D

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(no subject) - [info]antosha, 2008-01-06 05:37 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:30 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]antosha, 2008-01-06 06:56 pm UTC

[info]acciosnitch
2007-12-05 12:37 am UTC (link)
Wow, I really ejoyed this. Fabulous plot, well-executed, good all over. A++!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:31 pm UTC
:O [Overtoned]
(Anonymous)
2007-12-05 03:23 am UTC (link)
I'm so. fucking. amazed.

That was

oh. my gosh.

afsdl;kfjasdlkfjsd;lkgjdf;lk

CAN I HAVE YOUR BABIES. ;-;

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Re: :O [Overtoned] - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:31 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-05 04:48 am UTC (link)
I don't care for present tense; it pulls me out of the story. But I really, really liked this, and I'm glad I read it.

laurel_potter on LJ

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:32 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-05 10:51 pm UTC (link)
I'm feeling goosebumps. This is so perfect and... just perfect. wow. I'll feel afterglow from this fic for days. This is fantastic!!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:32 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-06 07:50 am UTC (link)
This story is devastating, funny and touching. I love your characterizations--Harry and Ron were funny with Ron occasionally loving and thoughtful. Groundhog Day is such a wonderful movie and you did a fine job of incorporating that idea into the HP world.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:32 pm UTC

[info]melusinahp
2007-12-06 07:51 pm UTC (link)
This was such a nice read. Fun and sweet and it built up wonerfully to the release at the end. Beautiful, sensual sex -- very hot and romantic. I loved Ginny's characterisation and the way you wrote both Ron and Harry. Really, really nice.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:32 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-06 10:20 pm UTC (link)
Holy shit... that was an amazing story. Seriously. I am in awe. I loved it so much. I can't believe you wrote this as a secret santa gift! WOW!!! I must find your other stories. This one was just insanely amazing, I really can't express to you how much I loved it because I kinda feel like words are not enough... just simply amazing. I LOVED IT!!!!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:33 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-09 04:22 am UTC (link)
This was AMAZING. I loved your characterizations and the whole flow of the story was just perfect. Also, (as a fanfic writer myself) I picked up some new brit-vocabulary. (Basically, I was reading and saying "ohhh, you would call it that! that sounds so much better than the americanized term i used!"). I love learning from other authors. Your fic is a new favorite of mine :)

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:33 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-09 06:17 am UTC (link)
Great story. Too bad I don't have an account, because I don't like giving anonymous reviews. Again, great story. Arlene

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:33 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-09 11:04 am UTC (link)
I really enjoyed this, a great idea and really well executed!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:33 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-10 05:17 am UTC (link)
oh oh oh, that was amazing! the best harry/ginny i've read in a very, very long time.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:34 pm UTC

[info]damned_queen
2007-12-10 08:12 pm UTC (link)
This honestly was a fantastic read (and that's saying something when coming from a Harry/Ginny hater like me)

Wonderful characterizations, Harry was adorable, and Ron was... Ron.

Just what I needed after a hard day of work ;) Thank you for that

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:34 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-10 10:30 pm UTC (link)
I'm not a H/G reader at all, but this fic was a Hot Rec on the Daily Snitch, so I bit. I'm very glad I did! It's such a lovely story. Thank you very much! I enjoyed it a lot.

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Damn, it was me above - [info]painless_j, 2007-12-10 10:31 pm UTC
Re: Damn, it was me above - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:35 pm UTC
lord, yes
(Anonymous)
2007-12-10 11:45 pm UTC (link)
that was great! i love that fairy tale. and groundhog day is a seasonal favorite. thanks for the read.

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Re: lord, yes - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:35 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-11 07:33 am UTC (link)
*sigh*
It's things like this that make me certain I'd better just pack it in. Really, really gorgeous.

*ozma_katiebell*

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:36 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-11 08:58 pm UTC (link)
Oooohhhhh my god...that was the most perfect thing ever! Oh my god...Ah;eia;wliej~!!! I feel like I didn't breathe for the entire story, it was so amazing! Oh my god...I'm so in love with this. So, so beautiful and wonderful and everything good and sexy and fabulous and I love your Ginny and Harry so so much and AHHH!! I'm so happy right now! :D

(ayappe on LJ)

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:36 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-17 05:14 am UTC (link)
WOW! that was unbelievably awesome!!! i never wanted it to end! great premise, great characterizations...just GREAT! it could be turned into a long chaptered fic, though, which would be super... hint hint...
loved it!!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:36 pm UTC

[info]femmenerd
2007-12-18 07:48 am UTC (link)
Quite seriously, this is one of the best fics I've read in awhile. The Ginny voice is impeccable (and sympathetic), the details are visceral, and she, Harry and Ron just seem like...people. Flesh and blood, which is a quality rarer than I'd like in fic.

Thank you.

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:37 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2008-01-01 02:26 am UTC (link)
Oh wow. This is amazing, I'm so glad I found it!

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:37 pm UTC

[info]magnolia_mama
2008-01-06 04:46 pm UTC (link)
Well, I'd meant to review this before reveals went up, but since I'd already guessed who you were it probably doesn't make a whole lot of difference. :-P

Truthfully, I almost didn't read this through. The bit with the queen of the high elves set off several alarms, and the canon-thumper in me almost fainted in horror. It's probably unfair to say this, but I doubt I would have continued if I hadn't known you'd written this--knowing that you wouldn't let me down was what enabled me to continue.

And, God, I'm SO glad I did. I'm so in love with the "made for each other" aspect of Harry/Ginny, and you've portrayed that with such depth and clarity and heart-breaking beauty here. I love how it's not tarted up!Ginny who finally manages to break the spell, but rather a more down-to-earth Ginny, someone who is vibrant and deliciously snarky but also warm and vulnerable and generous. And Harry is just so... GUH. So adorable, with his dorkiness and his befuddlement and his ability to keep up with Ginny's moods. I mean, really: they ARE made for each other.

This is far and away the best H/G entry for this fest. And, yeah, it took balls to include the queen of the high elves bit, given what a popular conceit it is among the FF.net crowd. :-P

*squishes you*

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(no subject) - [info]jenadamson, 2008-01-06 06:38 pm UTC


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