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The HMS STFU - OK, this is just stupid
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sheep | | Link: | (Link) | | Time: | 2009-05-07 08:22 pm (UTC) |
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| one poster said the narrative should have switced to Neville's POV for a few sentences to explain that he felt a thud on his head
Some one has been reading too much bad fic. | | (Reply to this) (Thread) |

mcity | | Link: | (Link) | | Time: | 2009-05-07 08:51 pm (UTC) |
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| | I've said it before and I'll say it again; James Patterson is the only one who gets to switch PoVs so often, and even he sometimes does it too much. | | (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread) |
| ~*~*~*~*~*~*~NEVVILE'S POV~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* (a/n: brackets are thoughts ok!)
Nevvile sed OW! (what just hit me in the head ouch! Omg it hurts)
OMG IT'S BUM BUM BUM THE SWORD OF GRYFYNDUR!!!!!!!
~*~*~*~END OF CHAPPIE~*~*~*~*~*
(a/n cliffie! what will happen next, r&r to find out! no reviews no chappie!)
I can totally see that in the HP books. Can't you?
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sheep | | Link: | (Link) | | Time: | 2009-05-09 07:36 pm (UTC) |
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| | I consider myself a fairly hardcore JKR and HP fan, and I would have loved to have known what was going with the alter trio while the primary trio were out camping (lord knows it sounded far more interesting), but if anything resembling this comment ended up in the books, I would be yelling with displeasure as loud as the harmonians at the height of their bashittery. | | (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread) |
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The HMS STFU - OK, this is just stupid
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