The only thing that makes me twitch is that last line, and that's mainly because Cassandra Claire stole that Buffy quote about wearing a ribcage as a hat and put it in Draco's mouth.
Ah! I knew I was doing something Buffy-ish there, but I didn't realize I was so close to an exact quote from the show! *^.^* (I either watched my Buffy DVD's one too many times, or it's been too long since I last watched them and I need to watch them again.) And Cassandra Claire used the proper Buffy quote with Draco, to boot? Oh, my. Perhaps that was a darling I should have killed. I'll have to watch my pop culture homages, in the future.