Yeah, that was her, and now that you mention it that did get annoying. Though at the time I might have put the whole Murphy thing down to "PIs in fiction always think the cops are irrationally after them when they aren't.")

I guess I remember some werewolf (?) who I thought was being described from a really male-gazey point of view and getting tired of that, but... that's all I remember as far as "fail" type stuff. But again, that's probably my memory and not anything else.