The books were originally set in Kansas City a town Jim knows well since he lives close by. But TPTB stated "Oh no that's too close to St Louis! And Laurell K Hamiliton's (NYT Best Seller..at the time...Writer of the Anita Blake Books) turf setting you have to change it, NOW" He glanced at a Map and picked Chicago at random with little or no time to fill in the blanks or research.

Jim's pretty open to crit, however I don't think F-Bombs are appro for Con-Crit and yeah I think there is MORE than enough fail to go around. The original blogger and Jim's reactions