the BNF dance, or, Plagiarism is a Crime
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Aug. 10th, 2006 @ 09:09 am
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bad_penny is full of plagiarism accounts these days, isn't it? Plagiarism brings ALL the HP BNFs to the yard, it seems.
I'm suspicious now.
More correctly, I'm /annoyed/. Y'all, this is becoming a witch hunt. That's not okay. white_serpent has some great points -- there's obvious plagiarism going on there. But about a third of the quotes she's using to prove plagiarism ... aren't. I do not buy this comparison:
"You're in Gryffindor... you're idea of a cunning plan is 'everyone oon the count of three'"
~DS
"One two three? One two three isn't a plan, it's Sesame street."
~ Buffy: The Vampire Slayer
as an example of plagiarism. It ain't. Expression of vaguely similar ideas, using completely different language, is ... oddly enough, it seems to be writing! One might attribute the vague similarity of ideas to inspiration, or possibly having said episode on tv while writing said chapter.
That's not plagiarism. About every third reference, and two of the four of the quote comparisons used on the fanhistory wiki, are false accusations. I'm resorting to definitions here: "the copying of someone's ideas, text or other intellectual property and claiming it at one's own" (wiktionary). Intellectual property is trickier, but wiktionary says "any product of someone's intellect that has commercial value, especially copyrighted material, patents, trademarks etc".
Specifically debunking the above quotes as plagiarism, Sesame Street made be trademarked but it passes as an acceptable cultural reference, the idea of counting as a reference to Sesame Street is nowhere mentioned in the passage from the DT, and there is absolutely no similarity at all in the phrasing.
Look, I am by no means defending Cassie from the plagiarism charge -- even one instance is enough for trouble, and the long quote cited in Part III of white_serpent's write-up is clearly plagiarism. But I invite you, before you lynch me too, to take a much closer look at Part XII.
The claim of plagiarising from Tanith Lee in Chapter 14? Unlikely. There's not enough textual similarity -- and similarity of plot in that low level of detail is not plagiarism. It's still copyright infringement, but I doubt anyone who writes fanfiction can speak against that.
"As for the sword/dagger with the opal: the line about symbols was cited to Wolfe's novel, so I looked at the nearby lines in Draco Sinister and noticed the description of the dagger. I did a search through the book on Amazon for the word "opal." I found another beautiful weapon with an opal in its hilt. You may think it's not particularly similar, but, hey, interesting coincidence, isn't it?" This is complete and utter bollocks. A gemstone in a weapon is not a basis for assuming that Cassie swiped the idea from someone else.
The comparison of Chapter 14 with Roger Zelazny, The Guns of Avalon, Chapter 9 is also bollocks -- look at what's bolded! If white_serpent bolded the parts that she considers plagiarism, I really wish she would learn what the word means.* What's bolded are usually single words or very short phrases. This cannot possibly be considered textual plagiarism (direct lifting of text), or plagiarism of ideas (the ideas expressed are far too common; this is meant to refer to detailed and specific ideas such as that of having to kill every shape a shapeshifter wears). It also cannot be intellectual property plagiarism, for the same reason.
I will restate: similar ideas, however suspicious they might be, are not plagiarism. That type of plagiarism is intended to refer to highly detailed and specific ideas -- this is not it. The farther I scroll down that page, the less actual plagiarism I see, and the more misplaced zeal there is. The majority of the quotes compared on that page could be cited by a simple statement of "Some ideas and scenes inspired by [book], [author]."
This is a witch hunt, y'all. It really is. For all that Cassie Claire did clearly lift whole paragraphs from a few books, her plagiarism is by no means the whole-sale ripoff of the entire sci-fi-fantasy canon that some people are making out. What she wrote is not good writing. It's not pastiche. It's not an homage. It's patchy, and irregular, and pieced together -- but it's mostly not plagiarism, either.
Mostly, it seems to be a rather bad attempt by a young writer to include as much popular fandom as possible in a fic based on an extremely popular fandom. She made the hugely stupid mistake of lifting a few scenes from a few published books, thereby plagiarising. This demand for absolute, MLA citation of every single little word she might possibly have gotten from an immersion in fandom is absurd. And the continuing search for other plagiarism in her works and in the works of her erstwhile supporters and friends is equally absurd.
Come to your senses, y'all. Really. The story is out there for people to judge now, so let it lie.
*Which inevitably leads me to think of the quote "You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means." which most geeks and many others know is from the Princess Bride. I suspect, however, in such instances, citation should be as the Tux Penguin -- it may remain uncited (considered common knowledge) until such time as someone asks.
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it may remain uncited (considered common knowledge) until such time as someone asks. If and when such time arrives, you are to threaten the questioner with lawsuits and have them driven out of fandom by rabid poodles, after which benedictory silence and Tux Penguin comes into effect again.
I assure you my senses are in perfect order. Cassandra Claire's fanfiction is mostly not plagiarism? Possible. And the discussion on Bad Penny report is mostly not a witchhunt, so what?
I haven't read the bad_penny write up, and probably never will, since, y'know, life is short. But it is important to distinguish between plagiarism and being derivative.
I save being the plagiarism police for when I'm at work and it actually, well, matters.
The one entry I read on CC, she was definitely being plagiaristic. As you and I know (being/having been English teachers), people like to, well, try to obscure their plagiarism so they can claim technicalities. Lots of them weren't literal word-for-word-all-the-way-down examples of plagiarism -- they were literal word-for-word-partway-then-a-few-changes-before-resuming-word-for-word-wash-and-repeat -as necessary examples. I had more than one student try to tell me it wasn't plagiarism because s/he was just incorporating the words and using their own words scattered throughout. I even had a couple of parents try to tell me that after I flunked their pweshiush 19 year old. I just explained, with as much patience as I could muster, that it's still plagiarism in much the same way as the occasional right answer on a test didn't make their kid less of a dumbass overall. Okay, I didn't phrase it quite like that, but still...
My favourite this semester was: I don't know how this could have happened! I must have done it subconsciously! I suppose theoretically your fingers could be hitting controls c and v without you noticing, but it's a bit of a stretch.
I'm going to disagree on whether most of it wasn't plagiarism. The "until someone asks" rule is neither a legal nor a moral standard -- and even if you gloss over stealing ideas or tropes, you *always* cite when you're lifting passages verbatim unless it can reasonably be argued that the passages are of such common parlance that citation is either redundant or meaningless. If I say "In the beginning, God created the Heavens and the Earth," I don't have to cite the Bible. Ditto "To be or not to be" and Shakespeare. Both can reasonably be considered cultural artifacts within our society. OTOH, lifting entire paragraphs and scenes, even if you try to obscure the plagiarism by adding your own touches, from works of relatively limited prominence in the cultural discourse (Pamela Dean? Roger Z.? both are popular *in certain circles* but can hardly be argued to be known by heart by a large percentage of the population), you're commiting rather flagrant plagiarism. Even if they were directly cited as being other peoples' words -- and they weren't -- they'd still run afoul of copyright. It's not in any way a grey area here. The words were lifted straight from another persons' text and used as if the lifter had originated them. "Inspired by" means you take a cue from, or, at worst, imitate. There's a substantiative difference between imitation and theft.
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| From: | naienko |
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August 10th, 2006 05:19 pm (UTC) |
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I guess I didn't make myself clear. I'm attempting to draw a distinction between three things: 1) the wholesale lifting of full passages, which ought not to be done, cited or no; 2) the usage of specific and probably well-known-by-the-fandom lines from a given show or book, which ought to be cited in brief; and 3) the imitation of a given scene or idea, which is a very grey area but I don't consider /plagiarism/. Copyright infringement, yes. Plagiarism, no. What I was trying to point out was that about a third of the examples, particularly of the sort I quoted, are very much either #3, or they are plain and simple accidental coincidence, cited as plagiarism by an incensed group of people looking for as much as possible to hang Cassie with. Cassie made herself plenty of rope with the underworld scene. This scouring of her work for lines, words, ideas and phrases that might remotely be considered related to other, already published work, is excess. white_serpent /encouraged/ others to go out and find more plagiarism, under the apparent assumption that where there is one passage, there may be more. She may be right. *shrugs* I never read the DT, I don't intend to start now. I'm certainly not going to go in and find a passage that contains the word "parchment" and claim Cassie plagiarised. I /object/ to that nearly as strongly as I object to the original act of plagiarism.
The thing is, Cassie borrowed dialogue from so many different sources that most readers aren't going to recognize all of them, and many of them will think Cassie came up with the wity quotes that they can't recognize. I've heard that lots of people praise Cassie for her wity dialogue, which seems to be a case of people not recognizing some of the quotes she used, and when Cassie doesn't say "Thanks, but the witty dialogue is all stuff I borrowed", she takes credit for the work of other people, which is plagiarism to me.
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| From: | naienko |
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August 10th, 2006 11:24 pm (UTC) |
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The stuff from Dracula, the comparison of Chapter 14 with Roger Zelazny, The Guns of Avalon, Chapter 9 -- that is not plagiarism. It's got nothing to do with witty dialogue, which I absolutely agree she nicked from here there and yonder. Absolutely, not all the quotes have been found. But some of the bits, even in the write up, which are being cited as evidence are not. Inspiration, clever paraphrase, but generic enough ideas are being paraphrased that nobody could ever hope to stand behind a claim that she plagiarised those bits. Just ... no.
Please, please look at the quote I lifted from the fanhistory wiki, which has been linked several times. If that comparison truly represented plagiarism, no honest person would write, ever. That is the kind of thing I am worried about, not that "innocent" fangirls will continue to claim that because it's not a word-for-word match in many cases she didn't actually plagiarise.
"You're in Gryffindor... you're idea of a cunning plan is 'everyone oon the count of three'" ~DS "One two three? One two three isn't a plan, it's Sesame street." ~ Buffy: The Vampire Slayer Actually, "Your idea of a cunning plan is 'everyone on the count of three'" is verbatim from Black Adder, not Buffy. Shall have to go and tell white_serpent that.
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| From: | naienko |
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August 10th, 2006 11:26 pm (UTC) |
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/That/'s plagiarism!
In a way, this is part of what makes CC's form of plagiarism so insidious. The line evokes a line from Buffy, but it's only evocative and not plagiaristic unless one is also familiar with Black Adder, in which case it's not evocative but exact and completely plagiaristic. I doubt anyone will find all the instances of direct but uncredited quotations in the fic. But I daresay someone will try.
Which comes to the point you were making in the first place: it's time to stop. It's beginning to be bit like crystalwank where people were going all over the place and bringing practically anything she ever posted to fandom_wank with "OMG! And she said/did this, too!!" Most of which was pretty banal but now it was crystal and therefore interesting. Except that it was really just banal.
The examples that were pulled together are more than enough to show that plagiarism took place in the DT, and that it wasn't limited to the first few chapters of the first book, but throughout. The evidence is there, the reputation has been thrown into question and now it's up to Cassie to show in her original work that she has what it takes to write without using the work of many other people.
Just to note: I believe I linked that example from an old thread on Fandom_Wank (which is, I assume, the same place that the fanhistory.com wiki got it). It does not actually appear as one of my examples, basically because I didn't find it convincing.
If I can figure out where it comes from in the Draco Trilogy and where it appears in Black Adder, however, I will add it.
Actually, I can't even find a place I've linked to it in Part XII. Go figure.
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| From: | naienko |
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August 11th, 2006 12:21 pm (UTC) |
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basically because I didn't find it convincing
That's comforting.
Gods, it's hard to find a way to say something like that on jf without being taken for sarcasm! Here, have some dack daniels.
:) Thanks.
I'd also like to say that my goal in tracing authors and sources isn't to humiliate the plagiarists. I know there are a lot of things in these works that people love. What I'd like them to know is where those things came from. One of the good outcomes of this has been a big increase in Pamela Dean's sales on Amazon. I (like others) will probably be going out to buy People Could Fly. I didn't know that some of the imagery in the DT came from Tanith Lee; maybe I'll read more of her books.
So, I'm not trying to trigger a witch hunt. It may turn into that, but it's not what I'm trying to do.
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