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stellar_dust ([info]stellar_dust) wrote,
@ 2007-06-11 16:48:00


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Current mood: Forlorn

Here, have some pirate fic.
Couldn't get this out of my head after we saw the mini-forge on Saturday. Unfinished, but I have to go home now. d-: Who knows if I'll ever touch it again.




Will Turner's Forge

The heart of a blacksmith is in fire and earth, and it abhors the sea.

They say for every truth somewhere there's a man what proves it false, and here's William Turner, smith born of water, lord and Captain of the ship as sails men's souls to world's end, the Dutchman - and I tell you it ain't a myth.

Though it's true enough William Turner's heart never went to sea. No man knows where it lay, on land somewhere, and maybe buried next to a mess of treasure, aye, all under guard of his lady love. Some say it were for love of her he carved it out, the Pirate King, as noble and terrible a lady as ever lived, and mayhap it were at first, but I know it were for love of craft he done it in the end.

Can ye see him there? He'll near forget he ever had a love before Calypso, ever knew aught but the sea and the damned, near mad with forgetting, then there he'll be, there in the great ship's hold, all grim muscle and sweat and sinew and long golden hair, laying into that anvil like a god, every bit as old Davy Jones used to lay into his organ. (Oh, aye, best not to forget there were a long, cruel time before we called it Will Turner's Locker!)

And you'd see, if you were there, the wide ocean might draw back a bit, might give quarter to William Turner's Forge and there'd be for an hour or a week a bit of earth and fire as ought not, a thousand leagues under the open sky. And far off somewhere that blacksmith's heart'll reach out through the dirt and sea and fire and iron, and for just an instant you might think Will Turner were a mortal man, admiring his work in a new sword, thrusting it to set in a steaming bucket as if to spear the very heart of the sea. You might hear him cry out "Elizabeth!", or mayhap "Jack!", or more an more as the years pass on you might just hear him cry. For it's a hard, cruel thing, it is, for a blacksmith's soul to love the sea.

And his crew, though they be damned, well, a damned man with a fine sword beats a saint without any day.


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Epilogue? Sequel? Completely unrelated?

You can't keep a Pirate King on land no more than a blacksmith's heart at sea, and so of course they meet, now and nonce, when time comes he'll claim one of her crew or those who cross her. And if you're lucky enough to be there, you might hear him cry through the clash of battle "Elizabeth, is it safe?" and her answer with a most fearsome laugh, hair streaming behind and eyes agleam, "Aye, Will, it is!"

Might be he smiles with pride on the lad who fights beside the King. Might be he frowns at the man who stands behind her. Might be, all the same, he's glad to see him there.


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[info]melannen
2007-06-12 10:01 pm UTC (link)
Yay!

(sorry, used up all my words.)

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[info]stellar_dust
2007-06-13 02:09 am UTC (link)
.... you fail at feedback, you know. *eyes her TDS fic languishing over on LJ* d-:

Fine, I'll beta myself. The last two paragraphs totally don't follow or fit with the rest of the piece. There needs to be a lot more stuff in between, and probably more stuff after.

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[info]melannen
2007-06-13 03:55 am UTC (link)
Oh, you wanted a beta! You didn't say!

I know I fail at feeedback. This is not unknown to me. Yay!

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[info]stellar_dust
2007-06-13 11:10 am UTC (link)
Actually, I don't particularly want a beta, because that would imply that I intend to do something else with it eventually.

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[info]melannen
2007-06-13 01:24 pm UTC (link)
Oh, but you should! This really is excellent. I think all you actually need to do is just *take out* the last two paragraphs - which for one thing contradict the speaker, who isn't entirely sure there ever *was* an Elizabeth - and then post it to some communities and wait for the feedback to roll in!

Will-as-smith need a lot more play in fandom. (And canon, but there's not much we can do about that now.)

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[info]stellar_dust
2007-06-13 03:46 pm UTC (link)
But there was so much more in my head, about how he made port at Tortuga and hired someone to gut out the organ and replace it with a massive forge, and how Bootstrap told him that Davy was a poet/songwriter, how he had a similar agreement with the sea (for awhile, till he broke faith) to not rust the pipes, and how at first he thinks the forge makes him feel connected to Elizabeth, but then he starts running into her at sea and realizes that's not it at all, and ....!

Besides, the only potc fic comm I look at is sparrabeth, and this doesn't fit particularly well. d-:

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[info]melannen
2007-06-13 04:10 pm UTC (link)
But that's a different story than this one! This one's about the stories other people tell about Captain Turner of the Dutchman, that one's about Will.

I mean, write that one too, but no need to scrap this one for it.

(Hee. We do canonically know how Will works out his frustration when he feels like he can't have Elizabeth, don't we? I keep visualizing Jack stumbling on deserted sand-spits with huge stacks of Turner swords on 'em, and pulling one out to salute the sea and make a toast to eunuchs!)

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[info]stellar_dust
2007-06-13 04:19 pm UTC (link)
Actually, I'm starting to think this one is kind of an epilogue to that one ...

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[info]melannen
2007-06-13 04:46 pm UTC (link)
Speaking as a long veteran of not-ever-writing-the-long-research-heavy-stories-in-my-head, just the epilogue is FINE. Especially when it's as well-written as this one.

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[info]stellar_dust
2007-06-13 07:58 pm UTC (link)
kfine. Give me a GOOD beta of everything-but-the-last-two-paragraphs, and tell me what comm to post in, and I'll do it.

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